(CE) 'Watching The Starfall'

Well, here's my entry for 's contest ---> shiranova.deviantart.com/journ... My idea was to show what shira mentioned about Sol being like a little brother for Lilja, that made me think Lilja is kind with him so one night she took him (a bit against his will) out to show him a beautiful starfall.

This whole picture almost killed me (more because of the lighting at night changing the colors [that isn't achieved as well as would've wanted anyways]) -.- but I like how it turned out in the end so it's worth the headaches. (I actually did a first version but it was too simple and lacked any kind of interest >.<).

Constructive Criticism of this pic will be greatly appreciated.

I think I've improved (specially the hair) even though I haven't drawn in some time (like 1 month >.<) gotta finish the requests I have in my "to do" list... BTW it'll take some time but my requests are open ATM in case someone is interested (6 slots)
Take a look at the other entries, they're really good ---> shiranova.deviantart.com/favou...
And join if you want ^-^ I'll give 2 prizes to each one of the 4 winners